Will you take some time and comment-on/criticize/rate the poem I wrote [typed]?

I really enjoyed your poem, Its deep in its thought. I so agree with you on where is the action.Words don't mean anything with-out action behind them. If I'm reading into it correctly.(if not please don't take offense, I really like it.) You are a pretty good writer. Good luck! I give you an 71/2 out of 10